Chasin' dreams, lovely kisses + 3rd Mizu No Oto contest
{This part is split into three: the 50-word tasker, @vdux's Haiku contest and Mizu No Oto contest (ran by @bananafish and @marcoriccardi).}
[Photo taken by @marcoriccardi.]
There defiant now
above the watery desert
protrudes stork and rock
This part of the post is made for the haiku, Mizu No Oto, contest. Click here to see it.
A kiss purely smooth -
yet the figure none-the-wise
of the near slow death.
This part of the post is made for the haiku contest. Click here to see it.
The figure ran outside chasin'!
Chasin' towards the lucky beauty!
Chasin' the thing of dreams!
Oh, the figure chasin' about!
Yet lucky beauty ain't chasin'!
Oh, they're flyin' about town!
Sayin' the figure chasin' about!
Needs to work it now!
Or Death gonna kiss poison!
The poison of bad life!
This part of the post is made for the 50 word count contest. Click here to see it.
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This is poetic efficiency. Well done! I resteemed and I'm about to reply to the contest post.
LOL
Actually, you had a great idea! Poetry posts often are short, but putting in the same post different poems, not only optimize the post but also give us the opportunity to appreciate more your style! 😎
What a juicy crossover! I love the first verse it gives sense and originality to the others.
Your haiku is fantastic.
An excellent response to the prompt!
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This works so well! I do love bringing short poems together like this, it's a worry that only the first one will get noticed, cos, preview, but the way you've structured it, by stating the fact at the beginning entirely prevents that. I think the @vdux haiku is my favourite, such a beautifully dark twist!
I like how you entered three contest with one post.
I also enjoy your words.
Interesting 50-word poem, @theironfelix! I'm not quite sure what is chasing whom, but the poem is full of interesting action.
You're a bit of a philosopher, aren't you? :-)
Eh, maybe. (Also Steemit’s back, maybe.)