My First Haiku .... Ever
I can't believe I am making this post.
I tried to make a haiku. I don't know if it is a real haiku or just ... three lines of something. And it rhymes. I don't know if a haiku is supposed to rhyme?
Anyway, I am really shy about it, so I am not going to say anything else.
P.S. This is my entry for Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #7 - HALLOWEEN SPECIAL!
[photo credit: @f3nix]
Towers made by stone.
Rooms of absence. Fogs. Time gone.
Castle longs its dawn.
Created by @insight-out. Valeria Sim.
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Oh, thank you very much!
Rooms of absence is beautiful. Haiku doesn't rhyme but even without considering that your first attempt is excellent.. keep trying it will give you moments of harmony and relax 😉
had I not seen a darer
of the likes of yah.
All jokings aside, this is a nice descriptive Haiku playing on words to display the castle living past its glory of when it used to be useful. Upvot'd and resteem'd.
what a sincere response you gave her.
Kisses!
Hahaha, thanks @theironfelix. Do you really think that it is haiku? It rhymes, but I couldn't think of it without the rhyme :)
welcome it is fun to do this each week and I like yours.
Thank you, @stever82! You are all so kind encouraging my haiku attempts :D
Sencillamente hermoso, buen trabajo @insight-out
Gracias! :D
It's a fact that many people approach haiku full of shyness and then their first composition is a very good haiku! Welcome!
Thanks! Your encouragement means a lot to me! :)
That speaks to me.
Haikus are such a challenge.
It's like being hit by something one does not need to see precise but blurry and in this blurriness lies the precise. Does that make sense?
A wonderful first Haiku! I like it a lot.
Oh, I am sooo happy that "it speaks".
Not only that it makes sense to me but I couldn't put it better!
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