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RE: Haiku, image - Mizu no Oto Contest week #7
Oh wonderful! That's how haiku poetry is supposed to work.. It requires the interaction of the reader who resonates with the verses. That's the reason why ego, judgment and subjectivity has to be reduced or totally eliminated.
Haiku is like painting with little but determined strokes.
I'd say it's zen. Those strokes are part of the world of intuition, where for an ephemeral moment we forget of ourselves.
Thanks, we created together haiku poetry, writer and reader.
P.s.= I changed it.
Ah, yes - thank you for reminding me on that. Not only the haiku creator but the reader as well has to surrender and put the ego into it's place.
But the Zen turtle says: you shouldn't have changed the verses. They already created a sphere, a resonance and now you rob it off and all words and comments become meaningless ...
ts ts ts
You're right but I'm way far from the enlightment haha
So? Is that an excuse? ;-)
Isn't the same concept of enlightment a construct that pushes us away from it?
However, I want to see you writing a haiku now!
☝
smotch botch
needlework passion
passed by
grabbing shiny plastic
Troll in the forest -
Someone's else post is ideal
for mocking.
😂😂😉
This is a senryu.