An Original Haiku: SEASONS
Your thermostat set on max...
Lizard gets a tan!
Dappled light on dappled leaves.
Carpets of speckle!
Deep freeze ushers your deep sleep.
Creatures wear thick fur!
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Colour festival erupts,
Birds singing sweetest!
Haikus are a Japanese traditional poetry form which uses 17 morae to tell a story. In English the accepted format is 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 line structure.
The challenge is to express your thoughts with with a minimum of words, similarly to Earnest Hemingway's famous six word sentence.
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Peculiar photo!!
It is rather odd, I agree!
Gorgeous collection.
This is my favorite:):):)
Thank-you @prydefoltz - I pleased you've enjoyed it!
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Enchanting as the spring season. Excellent set of haikus, @rlt47
Thank you, @zeleiracordero
No more enchanting, than your kind words.
The change of season brings joy with the song of the birds and the flowering.
Indeed it does, and the best is in spring!
how lovely @rlt47. A journey through the year in haiku! an awesome one at that my friend. thank you =D
Thank-you @karmashine, I do appreciate the support. :)
This time you had to make it four, huh? So it doesn't break the natural course of events, plus I know, you couldn't leave one season without a haiku, you're a a sensitive one, R.)))
You know what is beautiful about this set? Everyone has their favourite season, and they can surely find it in your four-in-one haiku miracle, the miracle is your ability to keep the structure 5/7/5, you're a master!
Ah ha! I knew there was a reason why I enjoy doing Haikus... It's the great feeling you get when I read a comment such as this.
Thank you ever so much, for the beautiful comment.
Perhaps there will be a day with five or six haikus... or eight if ever I need to do one describing each of the legs of an octopus...