An Original Haiku: Moon
MOON
Silver disc in sky,
Sometimes sliver or full;
You keep time up there.
An Original Haiku - All Rights Reserved
MOON
Silver disc in sky,
Sometimes sliver or full;
You keep time up there.
An Original Haiku - All Rights Reserved
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Good one @rlt47. Haiku expert😊
@shanu - On the contrary I just enjoy having a bit of fun with the haikus :)
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Wow....Few simple words made a story...Good one dear @rlt47...
Keep posting....
I am making an attempt on the same...Let me know is it OK or not...
As Kid Wondered What
Then told King of Stars..
Now like Mother Earth's kid
@angelro - It is an extremely good attempt for a the first try!
A haiku consists of 17 syllables structured 5-7-5 per line.
Here is some more info - http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm
Oh....Many thanks for instant response....I just tried...
Next time I will make sure it is inside the syllabus of the syllable...
SO happy for the link you posted for easy reference....
Check this whether it is ok...Not an expert in counting syllables and all...Please have a look and let me know...Just feel interesting to make shape to something through few words
As Kid Wondered What,
Then told as King of Stars in sky,
Now as Earth's kid in blue sky
Thanks in advance
@angelro - A syllable is easy to count it is where a sound change occurs in a word.
Wondered = Won - dered, (2)
horrible = Hor - ri - ble (3)
so you have 5-8-7
Appreciate your way to teach me a new stuff....
Power of HHG might be
Thanks a lot
Nice attempt @angelro...try to participate.
Really feels good to see such inspirational comment....Most probably I think i may participate soon with your blessings....
Do visit my 2nd part when free.... https://steemit.com/travel/@angelro/taj-mahal-intoxicating-love-globally-part-2 Thanks in advance ...
Ok that’s good. Would wait to read your haikus.
Where is this fabled Haiku you speak of?
I would usually google this but I am determined to engage with people more.
Nice posts
Here is the link to some more info, hope it helps!
Here is some more info - http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm
Thank you for this pearl
Of wisdom from your kindness
I will teach my girl
@uzidee - You're welcome, I hope you learning to do some too! :)