I am making an attempt on the same...Let me know is it OK or not...
As Kid Wondered What
Then told King of Stars..
Now like Mother Earth's kid
I am making an attempt on the same...Let me know is it OK or not...
As Kid Wondered What
Then told King of Stars..
Now like Mother Earth's kid
@angelro - It is an extremely good attempt for a the first try!
A haiku consists of 17 syllables structured 5-7-5 per line.
Here is some more info - http://www.kidzone.ws/poetry/haiku.htm
Oh....Many thanks for instant response....I just tried...
Next time I will make sure it is inside the syllabus of the syllable...
SO happy for the link you posted for easy reference....
Check this whether it is ok...Not an expert in counting syllables and all...Please have a look and let me know...Just feel interesting to make shape to something through few words
As Kid Wondered What,
Then told as King of Stars in sky,
Now as Earth's kid in blue sky
Thanks in advance
@angelro - A syllable is easy to count it is where a sound change occurs in a word.
Wondered = Won - dered, (2)
horrible = Hor - ri - ble (3)
so you have 5-8-7
Appreciate your way to teach me a new stuff....
Power of HHG might be
Thanks a lot
Nice attempt @angelro...try to participate.
Really feels good to see such inspirational comment....Most probably I think i may participate soon with your blessings....
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Ok that’s good. Would wait to read your haikus.