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RE: WAPAT (W.rite A P.aragraph A.bout T.hat) Write a paragraph in the comments about this image! $1 SBD for best paragraph!

in #giveaway6 years ago

"Better then the Dorothy in the Wizard of Oz film eh." There was excitement in Kalem's voice. Cillian and Kalem were the lookouts, each had their own window on opposite sides of the old church. Abbey tried to understand the maps they had found in the hidden room in the tower. Cillian the youngest at 8 year old, his advice was to go higher, unknowing that they were not in control of the church direction of travel. Abbey, (17) trapped in frustration with not knowing where they were going, thoughts of how this can be happening was bringing her close to tears. She had no answers, Kalem might be her older brother by 2 years, but he was still caught up in the wonder and his own excitement. Enjoy the ride was his thoughts, and he was flying with that. "Another valley coming up" Kalem and Cillian both shouted at the unison, Kalem carried on with , "Prepare to dive". Abbey rushed to the one of the window, peered out with a thought in her head she could not quite piece together. They go below the clouds when there is a valley and above if the land rises. ........

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Wow, sounds like you're starting a pretty good little story there! Cool!

lol,, that's a paragraph somewhere in a story,

I was just implying adventure/mystery fairy-tale type thing.
More wrote as something you might pick up an idea from.
I figure it can be hard to Keep new material to mind to write about at times.
Just been that pen and paper I suggested to carry, :)

Hey, running another writing contest, of sorts. Would love to have you submit something if you're interested. here's the link. https://steemit.com/writing/@markrmorrisjr/4scirg-you-need-to-stop-what-you-re-doing-and-read-this-right-now-i-m-going-to-make-you-famous-on-steemit-yes-you

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