In That Hour - Day 204:5 Minute Freewrite - Poetry
In That Hour
The hour late,
we ne'er tary,
sunlight dances
in our eyes.
No matter, time is frozen
all obstacles do flee.
We stand in lines,
beholden,
begging for the sweet
nestled 'yond the moor.
We stand now
hand in hand
as others stood before.
Tinkling laugher rises
as bells 'bove churches ring.
Cymbals challenge silence
as childish voices sing.
Each careless thought
we're leaving,
footprints line the hall,
beyond a beaconing corridor
we heed an ageless call.
Thank you for reading!
This is my 5 minute freewrite hosted by @mariannewest. The prompt is
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I super love the poem!
Xoxoxoxo
Ahh, you are so beautiful in heart and soul, the world would suffer if your spirit were not here!
Thank you for the sweetest compliment.
😜 Here we go, You get one too LOL
We appreciate your work so much!! Thank you for being part of the freewriters!!
https://steemit.com/freewritepoetrydigest/@freewritehouse/poetry-digest-edition-five
Thank you! I am proud to be a part of freewriters!
It's a sort of miracle the connection that a poetry can create between the poet and the readers.. Your poetry looks to me like an eternal byzantine mosaic or a painting from Gustav Klimt.
That is a beautiful compliment and a humbling one, too. If I can speak to one heart with my words, I am truly blessed. Thank you for this wonderful thought. hugs
Please include this in the Freewrite House's Poetry Digest this week!! Your poem is absolutely lovely! Your flow with the music, the corridor and the journey on as the cares fall away had me both entranced and returning for a second read! tip!
Weekend Freewrite 5/12/18 - Single Prompt Option
Weekend Freewrite 5/12/18 - Part 1 - The First Sentence
Thank you for being so sweet, @brisby! I am touched by your comment. I don't normally include mine just because I don't want to look like I'm tooting my own horn, but I will make the exception. hugs! thank you for the tip, too!
Excellent poetry, reading it reminded me of an entry in my blog called "the infinite path", here I leave the link for you to read and comment. Receive a warm hug @wandrnrose7
Thank you for your kind compliment and for the resteem. I'm glad that you appreciated my poem.
Great post, so many banners at the bottom. Maybe a little too much?
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I suppose I could leave off some of the great groups but they are all so helpful! Have a wonderful weekend!
Love the poetry. You created a great mood with this one!
Thank you so much for the feedback, always appreciated!
Thank you so much for the feedback, always appreciated!
Love the poem! I don't know how you do it. Poetry seems to flow from you. I do well to write stories...
Thank you, my dear. I so appreciate your constant support and and stories flow so beautifully from you!
Thank you!
Here it is :)
https://steemit.com/freewritepoetrydigest/@freewritehouse/poetry-digest-edition-five
Guau! How deep your poem radiates, reading can move you to different moments and circumstances of life ... Well, that's what I felt ... Congratulations for such a beautiful poem. Greetings @wandrnrose