The Chip With Unlimited Command | 5 Minutes Free Write [Chip]

in #freewritepoetrydigest6 years ago (edited)

Tell me! How can I function?
If everything I do there will be a sanction;
You follow me like toxic—in liquid motion,
I can't breath because you watch my every action.



You shouldn't have asked for a human,
But rather a machine that was made to look like a man;
Insert the chip with your unlimited command,
Maybe this mutant can please you, like batman.



We are human we get tired—we cry,
We have our own emotions that can turn into fire;
You can be nice and maybe—just maybe—I can be what you desire,
But mock me, insult me, I'll make you regret why its me you hired.



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Yes we do need reminder as such that people are not machine. We have emotions and feelings and dignity and people should treat human they way they want other human treat them. A thought-provoking poem. Good job! Continue writing your freewrite. You've got it!

Hello @iamjadeline! so sweet and kind of you to read my writing, much appreciated.
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I felt honored. I may not be deserving at all. But I can't deny it makes my heart big. thank you.

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Aw thaaaank you! I truly appreciate this. It is truly encouraging.

Sometimes people treat other people as machines or objects, and not as human beings, and that's very annoying!

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It is truly annoying! On the other side it makes us stronger and realize are worth more. Thank s for dropping by.

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