The Broken Needle. Part 4. A Nanowrimo Freewrite.

in #freewritemadness6 years ago

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"Thank goodness" the doctor murmured under his breathe, he was starting to give up on the boy, but the oath taken before been handed his practicing certificate has made him come this far in bringing the dead back to life.

Bonny didn't seem to like been here either, he had wished himself dead. The living doesn't know the bliss in been dead, the dead in jealousy wished they are alive. They always have this one wish they wished was fulfilled. The people on earth calls it the bucket list, those in the afterlife knows it as the vanity list, it's surely after you're dead you begin to realise that all what what done on earth and the pompous bucket list all amount to nothing, vanity fair, they calls it that. It's all vanity.

The return of Bonny here was a relief to everyone, his neighbors has start to give great eulogy about him, all centred on his quietness. No one really has come into contact with him that much to give a very comprehensive report about him. His coming back to earth will also help to change some of his introvert behaviors.

He looked at the doctor with scorn though the medicine crew couldn't decipher at first why a boy just brought to earth doesn't sound enthusiastic to live. In few seconds the horror of what lies before him when he gets back home start to haunts his imagination. It would have been better if he was surrounded by human right activist and counselors. Those people are near the solution.
The medicine guys starts to wrap up there rescue mission and administer some injection and dose while Bonny's mom looked from the window with aunty Lucy pacing the corridor. Proving her innocence by telling everyone who cares to listen how she use to take care of him. Gesturing with her hand how she served him food this morning. Some part of those words caught Bonny's attention, he just doesn't know if to laugh it off or cry for help immediately. His mind was troubled by what lies ahead, what to do, who can help, what's the way out.

Shortly, his mom was allowed in and the first thing.
"O my God, thank God you're alive Bonny, we were all scared, sorry for whatever happened, I promise you it won't happen again."
Bonny didn't know which to believe, the devilish mom thirty minutes ago or the new angelic version of her. He managed to hug her, looks like his heart has melted by the little tears coming from his mom's eyes.

The woman was really sorry, she meant it. Looking at the doctor while they worked on his son's lifeless body put some deep regret into her, she wondered if it's worth it to have an innocent son pay for the sins of his guilty father. She, for once paused and thought it's not ideal to cut the fingers that offend not. It's not worth it.

The entrance of aunty Lucy changed the atmosphere, the mother in bonding position angered her a little but she was smart enough to join in the motherhood reunion than spoil it as usual. It's just too early to cause trouble.

The deep resentment of aunty Lucy to everything good isn't her fault either, men has dealt badly with her, fell into different scam and guys who will promise love and have the woman pay for the thing. When done, the woman will be left jilted. So many are left traumatize in this condition. For aunty Lucy, the trauma was eternal. Though looking at the boy, she kind of what to give it another thought by turning positive with her action. But only time will tell.

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