The Chance Meeting - Day 26: 5 Minute Freewrite
The Chance Meetimg
She struggled to slip on her new shoe, bending over to tug at the slim red strap. The clock announced 8:00 a.m. The bus came at 8:15. She knew the driver would not wait for anyone.
She grabbed her purse and umbrella. The rain was pelting at a steady rate. She couldn't be late again or she'd lose this new job.
Everything rested on her keeping the job, the best paying one so far.
She almost ran down the block.
A sporty black car was approaching from behind her and slowed to watch her race. She saw that car before. It was a day last week while she was waiting for the bus.
As she approached the bus stop she saw it's tail lights pulling out. She sprinted to catch it, but the strap gave way on the new shoe.
She slowed and cried out in frustration when the man in the sports car slowed down.
"Need a ride?" he asked sympathetically,"I promise, I don't bite.
She looked warily at his handsome face. She never did this before, but slowly nodded her head and got in the passenger side.
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This is my #freewrite for Day 26: 5 Minute Freewrite by @mariannewest - join the fun here:
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This seems to be a continuation of the previous freewrite here:
Bus Stop
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you are so nice in making articles and good thinking about small story too.
Thank you so much, @birjudanak. These are fun to write.
I would love to be able to wear shoes like that - but no way :( And I don't have a good feeling about that handsome faced stranger - I don't know why..... https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-27-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-it-s-what-i-do-at-2-30-in-the-morning-when-i-can-t-sleep
your story are so interesting and i love to read it.
Thank you for reading and commnting.
Oooh, getting in a strangers car is never good, I hope she's ok!
I had to add an element of danger! thank you, dear.
You had me at the image!
Haha aren't they gorgeous? Once upon a time I wore these kind of shoes and I can see why she'd by them. Thanks for reading.
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STOPGirl, you are really good!
Aww thanks so much!