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RE: Recommend Your Favorite Freewrite Poem - Week 12

in #freewrite6 years ago

I am really impressed by this poem by @emms. I was hooked on the leading line:

Have you ever felt so worn?
soaked and barely together?

I feel the exhaustion of a spirit that has tried and tried...sometimes you just feel like the water runs through you.
The comparison of a person to a washcloth was very interesting and I believe the writer has a deep understanding of suffering and trial.
Another interesting line:

A washcloth made to be used
filled with holes that just keep stretching

This line is multi-layered and could denote spiritual growth through trial. The poem a was very creative use of washcloths.

https://steemit.com/freewritepoetry/@emms/the-old-rag-freewrite-prompt-washcloth.

Definitely worth reading and rereading!

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