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Before the night comes to a close, she wanted to write one more time to the governor to plead for his help. She had to let him know that her son was innocent, and that he never meant to do any harm.

He was a good boy, she would say. But they looked at her as if she has some sort of mental infliction; or that she was too blind to see the truth

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But the time kept on ticking. And he son was behind bars.

After midnight she crumpled up the paper and threw it in the trash. There was no more hope. No reason to try. It had been a year since she began writing those letters.

A year had gone by, and her son had become thin, and frail. He needed his mother to help him. But she couldn’t help him.

She couldn’t tell him everything would be alright, because she didn’t know if was the truth.

Perhaps, she had been blind to her son’s actions. Perhaps he had acted in malice. Her son would never tell her the truth, because the truth may break her heart.

Ding!

Time's up!

This was fun! Thanks to @snook, for telling me about this!

P.s. It goes against all my writing skills not to edit this post before publishing it :D

Until next time,

Happy Writing- Sim Girl


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This is GREAT!! :D so happy you are doing this too!!

Thank you! I am glad you showed this to me! It is a great way to get story ideas. I really wonder what this lady's son did to land him in jail! lol.

Well done! Please, please elaborate on this in another post and write a longer story. I so want to see how this builds up and concludes! Love it!

So glad you are joining us!!! And thanks for toughing it out and forego the editing :) But the free writes might lead to stories you want to polish and edit :)

I appreciate the inspiration. I didn't realize five minutes of writing went by so fast. It was fun!

I thought it was beautiful although grammar and punctuation aren't my forte. You got that girl power!!

Thanks! You should try it. It is fun! I love your photo!!

Good writing.i like and upvoted.

Thanks so much for reading. And, for the upvote!

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