War Of The Fridge (Freewrite Story)

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Prompt: yoghurt

A 5 minute freewrite task set by @mariannewest

Link to task
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-165-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-yogurt

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War Of The Fridge

One day there was a nice pot of strawberry yogurt. It tasted and smelt very nice, exactly how a yoghurt should taste.

However, the pot was so big, that the bit left at the bottom got neglected. It was starting to smell a little.

The pot of raspberry yogurt wasn't happy and immediately declared war.

However, pots of yoghurt have no power in the refrigerated world. The yoghurt knew that it would need an army.

“Can't you smell it?” shouted the raspberry yoghurt. “It needs to be removed and it needs to be done now. Is anyone with me?”

The eggs respond.

“It's not that bad. I think, you don't want to share fridge space with a different flavour of yoghurt.”

“How can you say that?” answered the raspberry yoghurt. “Maybe you've got used to foul smells.”

The eggs weren't happy with that last remark.

The tomatoes tried to give their opinion.

“The eggs are right,” shouted the tomatoes. “I think it is not too bad. I think you just want war.”

“Shouldn't you be in the pantry?” shouted the raspberry yoghurt.

“Shouldn't you be in the bin?” responded the tomatoes.

The eggs liked that last remark, and began to applaud.

“It looks like the raspberry yoghurt has shut up,” said the eggs.

But the silence is soon broken.

“Is anyone with me?” shouted the raspberry yoghurt.

“No,” shouted the lemon. “Go away.”

“How about we get rid of the raspberry yoghurt?” suggested the eggs.

Next, the eggs, tomatoes and the lemon charge towards the raspberry yoghurt. They are joined by the milk, chicken and the green beans.

They manage to open the fridge door and throw out the raspberry yoghurt.

“Yeah,” they all shout. “Victory.”

“Is there anyone else who wants to moan about something?” asked the lemon.

There is no response, which means they can all get a good night’s sleep.

Me too.

Goodnight. 🌃

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Earlier, I completed a trilogy based on the April Fools prompt.

Here are the links

Part 1
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/the-fools-freewrite-story

Part 2
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/the-fools-part-2-freewrite-story

Part 3
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mr-neil/the-fools-part-3-freewrite-story

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Neat little story! I have never thought of different flavored yogurts being at war with each other. Definitely a fun spin on the freewrite topic of the day!

Thank you. Possibly the most fun I had writing.

I had a good laugh over this story. I like the implications on those who are dissenters being effectively stonewalled and ousted for their bullying. <3

They just want a peaceful life really. :-)

Very imaginative indeed. Well done.
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Thank you, I have a fun story in mind for the coconut.

HaHa! Talking food and applauding eggs. This was a fun read. : )

It was a fun write also. Thank you. :-)

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