Lace - (a 5 minutes freewrite)

in #freewrite6 years ago

That was the most beautiful thing ever! Nothing she'd ever worn before or since could compare to that black lace underwear she'd bought with the first money she'd ever won for the first night with the first man she'd ever loved.
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She knew she looked beautiful and sexy - no need to look for confirmation in Steve's eyes. She'd kept it for years, although she never wore it again after she and Steve broke up. Even looking at the damn thing became painful so she hid it in the back of the drawer.
Threw it away when she moved in with George, bad memories erased by the absolute splendor of her white lace wedding gown. She was still beautiful and the dress complimented her figure, delicately hiding the small bump where Trisha was secretly growing inside her. No, Trisha was not a shameful secret to hide away, they just wanted to keep it a surprise till the wedding reception, where the news was greeted with the pop of champagne bottles.
The only thing to come even close to that black underwear was the pink lace dress Trisha wore at her christening. The night before she'd spent hours looking from the sleeping baby to the delicate dress, waiting on a hanger. She cried with joy that night. Her life was perfect, George was a good man and Steve but a distant memory. A bad memory, but too distant to matter anymore.
There were no more fancy outfits after that. Too busy, too worn out to care
Then this - this delicate piece of black silk trimmed with lace, so light and soft to the touch. They laid it over her wrinkled face with gentle hands. A thing of beauty she'll wear for all eternity.

Written as part of the 5 minutes freewrite challenge created by @mariannewest!

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Heart-warming story :) Moving on to bigger and better things. The past is always a part of us, but doesn't dictate the future. Thanks for sharing fellow free writer! :)

A very nice story, and a great ending. I like it how she will be wearing something so special to her for eternity. Thank you for sharing it with us. 💚

What a circle life is.

Im glad it was a wrinkled face. Thank you for sharing.

Wow. What a beautiful post. I love how you took the lace through the entire lifetime and the different places it tends to hold in our lives. What an incredibly unique freewrite! This is going in my "Friday Favorites" post tomorrow!

Also, today I am helping the freewriters by delivering today’s prompt: Fried Chicken
@byn

Almost a whole life in 5 minutes!! well done!!

Here is an invite to the Isle of Write. We have a private room for the freewrite encouragers. https://discord.gg/sVMBenM

This Monday, Marco will be busy, but please coordinate with @ebitularmbert
the easiest would be in discord. Please let me know in the room called freewriting-retreat that you are on discord, then, I can add you.

I loved this freewrite and featured it in my Friday Favorites

@byn

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