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RE: Vacation (An Alliterative Poem, Freewrite #37: Coconut)
Another great poem! The feelings you try to convey through the poem feel too real, like you where actually there, is this based on a personal experience?
No, I mean, I live on an island so it's easy to picture what the beach looks like (even though I haven't been to one in 4-5 years). So the imagery is easier to come up with since it's familiar. I have had cocktails before, but on the beach. I've seen sunsets and moons, but not during that event :P It's just a little combining of this and that and putting myself into my character's shoes. Unless they're not wearing any.
I feel you, i don't live on an island but i live in a Caribbean country. I literally live 2 mimutrs away from a beach but i have not touched sand since 2014 lol!
Ahaha similar story then! Most people would lynch us for having such opportunity but we do not take it, but the beach is not for everyone.