The Big Dog is Arrogant! | Fiction Writing Prompt & Day 373 Freewrite

in #freewrite6 years ago (edited)

PART I

Queeny was licking her tiny paws out on the patio.

Red, yellow and orange leaves were falling all around her in a slow trance-like manner. All the better, for she looked forward to the fast approaching winter, where white blankets will envelop the streets and she will be safely nestled with her favourite two-leg near the fireplace back home.

But for now, she'll enjoy the cooling breeze. Queeny continued her elaborate cleansing ritual, daintily using her clean paws to wipe her forehead.

"What are you doing here?!" A deep guttural growl disrupted Queeny's idyllic peace and made her yowl in fright. She leapt up from the floor to the top of the marble railing, only to look down at a huge German Shepherd. Mutty was staring at her with an intensely fierce stare, the kind that police give to criminals they adjudged guilty before proven so.

His ears were perched straight up, as alert as they could be, while his eyes gradually narrowed. "Aren't you supposed to be out and not back til the sun goes down?"

"I wanted to rest." Queeny meowed softly in response to his extremely loud barks - and continued rubbing her head with her paws (this time not to cleanse, but out of nervousness).

"Rest? Or are you just pathetic at catching mice?" Mutty smirked at the long furred Persian who was crouching very low.

Queeny winced. That hit hard.

Since she was a kitty few weeks old she had already known she was unlike other cats. Queeny hated hunting, unlike her brothers-and-sisters-of-the-same-litter who would go into a bloodied frenzy and kill birds as well as other small creatures. She always thought that killing them was unnecessary because two-leg already gave them plenty of raw food.

And they always thought that she was too sensitive.

"I'll go." Queeny meowed quietly after looking at Mutty with plaintive eyes. With a single graceful leap, she got down from the railing and walked across the lawn. She frankly had no intention of hunting but she just wanted to avoid Mutty who was a merciless bully like the rest of her brothers-and-sisters-of-the-same-litter.

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PART II

Mutty stared as Queeny became a small tiny white dot in the horizon. He was utterly mesmerized by the way she moved, no, danced - though he will never admit it, no, not to anyone. Queeny's regal mein was the subject of his daydreams, though he tried to bark at himself to chase these silly thoughts away.

And there was her electric blue eyes...

So beautiful.

Mutty sighed and gulped hard. He knew there was something different, something special about Queeny from the first time two-leg brought that litter of kittens back, but dogs and cats were supposed to be sworn enemies. All he could do to keep that distance was to put on a faux bravado.

Mutty knew Queeny thought he hated her, but it was far from the truth.

She would never know.

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This anthropomorphic short story is dedicated to my furry friend, Tiger, who accompanies me on most days. <3

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(Tiger says hi back, albeit somewhat unimpressed.)

So I decided to try to merge the two prompts:

(i) The big dog is arrogant (@blockurator fiction writing)

(ii) Hate (@mariannewest freewrite)

Go, give both or either one a try and tell me how it goes! (:

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Resteems and upvotes are always appreciated!

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Awesome interpretation of both prompts. I especially like the nickname given to the human owner, "two-leg." I think that was a nice touch.

I didn't see part two coming! There's always a rivalry between cats and dogs. I love how you turned that on it's head. Great work on continuing the prompt from @blockurator. I enjoyed his story also and it's nice to see what else has spawned from that.

Thank's for sharing!

@jocqua awww that's very sweet (:
Yeah hahaha that is how I thought they must view us humans as 🤣

Hahaha totally! And it made perfect sense to me. Animals are probably totally confused by the fact we're walking around with only two legs. Great stuff.

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Your story is lovely. The way you describe each cat and dog feelings, make me feel like I am inside that house too. I hope you continue the story and bring it to a happy ending :)

@leilanyarevalo haha thanks so much for the encouragement (:

I'm also thinking of a happy sequel, can look out for it soon 😊

Glad to see that someone has taken up the challenge! I love the touch you gave to this writing prompt (well, maybe because I love cats?) really funny and captivating. Plus, your writing style is cool!

So Mutty is crushing on Queeny? Heheheheh! So he is just trying to hide it with the arrogance... Please, don't tell me you are stopping here with this! It will be great if you kinda continue with it...

@audreybits hehe oohh you love cats too! Also, I'm really touched by your kind words of encouragement 😊

Yes hehe Mutty is crushing on Queeny :P I'm planning to continue, if I have time, today! 📃

Yeah yeah! A whole lot....😀😊

Oh, please do! Lets see how this crush plays out. I believes its gonna be a fun one!

Nice story @joeylim 😉 love doesn't meant to be together forever but a compassion towards each other and even mutty did the same like human do 😂 hello there Tiger😉 you are such an inspiration

@cicisaja thank you for your encouragement!! (:

hahaha YEAH Tiger is a beauty, isn't she? 🤣🤣
Just like Queeny.

You should named her tigress then 😂 yeahh she is like a queeny. But she's not persian though?

Nope she is not, just longfurred (:

Nice freewrite and congratulations on the curie vote!

@byn thank you! 😊

Nice job. I like the play between the dog and cat. Good touch, and good story.

Thank you very much @blockurator ((:

Really good

Nice story I like cats, I have 3, they are Siamese. I must tell you that you have structured your post very well, and your narrative is interesting and fun. By the way, I really liked that Marvel style gif that you put at the end. Good job, upvote!

@martinmcfly ohhh Siamese! Are they siblings?

Awww thanks (: btw the Marvel style gif is because I'm a member of the Steemitbloggers community!!

They are mother and sons. Steemitbloggers community, it sounds great.

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