Betrayal -5minutefreewrite (*3)

in #freewrite7 years ago

The only way John could pass the exam was by cheating on his wife with his teacher. But the only thing standing in the way of that was his wife. She refused to forbid it. It was not modern human Western culture. This exam was to become a licensed betrayer in Drow society. John was interested in the job because it came with great insurance, and was steady work, because no one betrays the betrayers, but it wasn't his passion, and so he told his wife about the final, and she was ok with it, so he couldn't betray her. She was betraying him by not letting him betray her. Plus she

""There you go, making up lies again." That is what they told me." She told him. Gretchen, for that was John's wife's name, had tried to help, in the end, by protesting loudly that he had betrayed her, but of course it hadn't fooled his teacher, who knew betrayal when she saw it.

"Your face belies your words," said Q'veldra, the Drow mother who knew that lies are best told quietly and quickly so there's less to examine for truth. That's also the best way to tell truths. It's just the best way to be believed, unfortunately for all the dramatic, angst filled teenagers.

the thing she did to the breaks on the Honda, which is to say, the bone breaks on the brakes on the fellow who is very large and calls himself Honda, was set them. There were healing spells that would have saved him faster, but there was too much interference.

In the end, Honda was murdered by John after John has earned his trust so that he could at last pass his betrayal exams. Oh well. There's a true friend. One who will let his guard down long enough to get betrayed. Not enough time to leave the house going glad good ghost morning soon somewhere somewhat tired head tired bowels. It's difficult to know when I should go to the library.

For https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-january-13-2018-part-3-the-dramatic-twist

Sort:  

I'm picturing Gretchen roaming around crying out "He's betrayed me!" and going WAY over the top with it. The idea of a betrayal exam...shivers. This makes me want to reread Salvatore's Dark Elf Legacy.

Today I am traveling from the town of Freewrite, delivering the latest of the Goddess Marianne's prompts accompanied with the musical honk of my bicycle's horn!
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-87-5-minute-freewrite-sunday-prompt-turbine

Goddess! Well, I dunno. When she was a lady, I could imagine the scenario - she holds salons and we gather to share our lusty poems and delicate prose. But as a goddess, I must fear her.

Ha! No need for fear! (Respect of a diety is always healthy...) You are always offering up creative delights and I have no doubt that she likes you! ;)

What monster hath I wrought?

Poor Honda getting his bones broken and murdered on top of it! Only because he is a big guy?

Only because he was foolish enough to trust a PhD candidate.

Interesting paradox. If a tree falls.....

This one grabbed me at the twist of *by cheating on his side with his teacher AND she was ok with it! Nice job with weaving the prompts in. Betrayal exams. You may have coined something new! Nice work.

the point is the Exam is a killer right...l'm a gree with buddy, by the way are serious about the story........????? regard from indonesia

Am I serious about it?

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.13
TRX 0.12
JST 0.024
BTC 51367.14
ETH 2266.57
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.01