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RE: Recommend Your Favorite Freewrite Poem - Week 8
Want to make sure this one from @jakim7 gets included in the next digest:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@jakim7/utopia-con-una-diosa-cuaderno-de-poesia-poemarium
Utopia with a Goddess
I dreamed that I undressed you slowly I
felt that you were burning me,
that your damp and resplendent hair
in the bathroom was falling
in love, in that utopian place I saw you lead
the body that to my tired eyes you offered, I
also remember how you tried to seduce
and hypnotize my life the rest of my days,
I could see how the doorknob
melted when your body brushed it,
you were burning lava that devoured everything,
a burning rock on a deserted beach,
I came to think that we fought a battle
that beat me in mourning and Your body won me
but with a quick movement I removed the towel,
already soulless I could see Venus as I imagined it,
when from that ethereal dream I could wake up
my life would not be the same, I could not dream again,
nor see in flea market or in a similar place
only at the end of my life I would return to find…
Honrado y agradecido por vuestra postulacion, me encanta esta familia de escritores, Saludos