Lazy wind! A fiction

in #freewrite5 years ago (edited)

Dear friends

I am pleased to participate in the daily challenge of @mariannewest, Friday's message: lazy wind. Continuing with Mary's adventures, here I present this fiction story that I hope you like.

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Mary was finally granted the Bank's credit so that day she went with her brother Mark to meet with the restaurant owner to finish the negotiation

Upon leaving there was a lazy wind that shook Mary's hair, so she animatedly told him:

"Mark, the hand of God has caressed me, I am sure that what we are investing will be very helpful for many people"

When they arrived at the site, they were both happy because from that day on their lives would chart another course.

Mary would cease to be a salaried person to become a businesswoman and Mark would no longer remember the sad days of his imprisonment in jail.

So at the time of delivering the payment check, the former owner of the restaurant congratulated them as he left in charge what had been owned by his family for several generations.

So he said:

"Good opportunities are not always achieved in this life, however this is one of them, so I wish you the best"

Mary replied in a sweet voice:

"Thank you for offering us this opportunity, you will see that we will not let you down"

Finally, they shook hands and to celebrate they uncorked a champagne's bottle.

(to be continue...)

© 2019, Felix Garcia P. All rights reserved

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Love it! Keep going, @felixgarciap. I hope you will publish this tale soon. I really admire your sticking to it and developing the story :)

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Good job!! Keep on going!

You guys are so amazing with the way you write these things.

Here with the weekend freewrite prompt

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https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-12-7-2019-single-prompt-option
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https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/weekend-freewrite-12-7-2019-part-1-the-first-sentence


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