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RE: Finish the story, earn steembasicincome shares and upvotes! Day #3
Your ending broke the narrative frame made by me, which was focused on ocd behaviour / envy / neighbourhood / hair looking back ... I'm enthusiast, had tons of fun with the dialogues ("I thought we were bald and proud?" Hahaha!!), plus I learnt from your style which is so fluent and fun. Thanks Janelle!