Ooze - Day 28 of the 5 Minutes Freewrite
"The Ecstasy of Saint Teresa", Gian Lorenzo Bernini. Rome
The negative effects passed unnoticed almost till the second generation. In the beginning, the Ooze was celebrated with joy as a new paradigm, the beginning of a new dawn for the entire globe. Notwithstanding the first overwhelming enthusiasm that was spreading and, as a matter of fact, consolidating through the most advanced countries, at about the same time all the researches converged on one conclusion: the Ooze was changing us, irreparably and not for the good. Now, the fact was that almost everyone, from the humble workers at the Moon's extraction fields, till the highest officers of the Federation, was by now deeply intoxicated and addicted. Oh yes, if you think about it, it had to come first or after, after the VR inoculation procedures, the genetic gambling houses, the spreading of the entertainment through vials, the sense deprivation chambers in every city, after all and all the shit that our derailed minds could give birth to.. The time had come for us to realise that we finally managed to fuck ourselves, no appeal, no turning back, no other satellite to colonise, nowhere to hide.
Official initiatives from the World Federation came and went one after the other, like the phases of a Freudian nightmare. Desperation, negation, mystification (at a point, by law, the intoxication had to be called "the progress" and the most addicted subjects were named "the elected"). In the end, all these pathetic attempts, a gross maquillage on a wrinkled prostitute, faded away without a noise in a puddle of Ooze.
Interesting!
If I may just philosophize for a second on your distopian future - the end for sure for developing countries, but us in the developing mountainous regions of the world will, as we always have, laugh and laugh about you city slickers and your 'first world problems'
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hah. That is what you think!!! We get you with our air pollution and nuclear carelessness soon. enjoy your numbered days of bliss :(
Actually, I hope we have your mountain to flee to......... Build a sanctuary for the freewriters from all over the world!
Indeed! We are planting our eden now, knowing that more will come! And you are welcome - freewriters will get first dibs ;p
Amen, you tell'em all about it! 👨🌾
Thank you for stopping by @ecoinstant! As even those mountain places use electricity and not cherosene lamps, they will also try and be enthusiast of the Ooze (this is how the novel would go beyond the 5 min idea). Are you typing from a smartphone, tablet or PC? then you'r oozable. Imagine it as a fancy soft drink, appearently innocent and very beneficial (at the beginning) Allegorical perspective wanted here. Oh btw, Im a countryside slicker at most, surely not a city one ;-)
Oh boy, in our local town center I see lots of oozeable people....but certainly not me!!!!
Lol! I will then give you a honor place in the novel as the non-oozable hero, something like the last of the mohicans 🤔
This distopic future seems to me very similar to the actual present. We're all Ooze filled and Ooze infected.
We're going "in the spiral black vortices of that ultimate void of Chaos wherein reigns the mindless daemon-sultan Azathoth".
Exactely!! fancy an ooze on the rocks? ;-)
Yup, the ooze is here......I know I have said it many times - but I am so glad you are a freewriter and I get to read what your crazy mind comes up with!! Love it so much! https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-29-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-great-grandpa-s-nose
And I am so glad that you're dedicating so much to this wonderful project @mariannewest.. it's a true gift for all of us dear friend!!
But, where did the ooze come from? That's the key. I wonder what's really going on at those Moon extraction fields?
Good hint @omra-sky.Appearently it's been reported that an extraction squad was missing for weeks over there. After 10 days of spasmodic patroling, they found them at the old abandoned quarters, inside a rotten barrack. "They found them" is not really appropriate for the horror displaying in that barrack.
I recognized those characters and I am absolutely positive that the ooze is here and we are all in big trouble! 😧
I very much enjoyed your style, I'm reading it as an allegory I hope that is correct. Either way it's darn good.
You and Marco got the spirit @deaconlee ;-) The Ooze could very well being facebook..or a mix of things. The economist published recently a very interesting article i would like to write about on how socials are impacting negatively on the active partecipating to the res publica.
Is that our future? Hail to the Ooze! Good one @f3nix :)
Yes the Ooze is our future..plus a bottle of it will be a prize for the best weekly freewriter :-P Thank you my friend!
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