Thank you so much, @deepsouthpiddlin! Something that I am working on as a writer is descripion -- fine detail. I'm great at dialogue but I really have to practice description, and this was a real effort, especially under the time constraints. Thank you also for your congrats on the curation response! Apparently a whole bunch of whales must have rolled up on this freewrite-- I just thank God, because I didn't expect that to happen!