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RE: Day 577: 5 Minute Freewrite: Monday - Prompt: window
I just thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I'm making my rounds now to catch up on reading this weeks freewrites. I love how descriptive you were with beautiful details. Your writing gave me a clear visual in my mind. A great example that material things and wealth cannot console a wounded heart. Congrats also for such a wonderful curation response to such a beautiful submission. ♥
Thank you so much, @deepsouthpiddlin! Something that I am working on as a writer is descripion -- fine detail. I'm great at dialogue but I really have to practice description, and this was a real effort, especially under the time constraints. Thank you also for your congrats on the curation response! Apparently a whole bunch of whales must have rolled up on this freewrite-- I just thank God, because I didn't expect that to happen!