Day 74: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: callous

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He looked at her with cold, heartless and unfeeling eyes and was oblivious to her tears and pain. Blood dripped from her arms and fingertips and made small pools on the floor in front of her chair. He knew that she loved him, he knew that she would do just about anything to make him happy, yet he remained callous and indifferent. Why should he care for such a weak-minded creature, why should he lower his intellectual standards for her benefit? He was king of this house and she was to do his bidding, how dare she lay a hand on him without his explicit permission! She got what she deserved, he could never let such a slight go unpunished if he were to maintain his lofty position as lord of this domain. Cry you impertinent servant, and never make such a mistake again.

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**Disclaimer: I often use the freewrite prompt to tell a story instead of doing a pure freewrite, so they sometimes take longer than 5 minutes and usually have some editing. But I try to do my story straight through at one sitting without any unnecessary breaks.
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Prompt: callous
Set your timer for 5 minutes.
Start writing
Use the hashtag #freewrite
Publish your piece (include a link to this post if you wish)
Copy and paste your URL into the comment section of the prompt post.
Or, if you don't want to publish your freewrite, just copy and paste as a comment under the prompt post.
If you don't know what a freewrite is, here is a link to the introduction post.

Introduction to freewrite

Thank you @mariannewest

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What a surprise, haha! Great freewrite :)

Hey! I'm interested in #freewrite but I can't find the link to the introduction post :( could you help steer me in the right direction?

No problem, I need to start including the link in my blogs. Here it is, I will look forward to your future entries. Introduction to Freewrite Have Fun!

Thanks! I searched through @mariannewest's profile and found today's challenge (Day 75 - "Dog Hair") challenge.


I posted my own response to the #freewritechallenge and would love if you checked it out!

https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mkkenny13/freewrite-challenge-day-75-dog-hair

This prompt is definitely inspiring some really great cold stories. Callous is a hell of a word! Great write up!

HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DLOVE It! :D Thank You for the belly laugh :D

that was too funny - especially after reading about the mass murderer who had more than 16 women on his consciousness - well, he didn't have one.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-75-5-minute-freewrite-prompt-dog-hair

Im here laughing and wondering how these jokes come to you mind hahah

If you figure it out let me know, but if they get annoying see if you can find the off button and shut them down lol. 😉

Hahah I wish I had an off button for certain kind of people but surely not for your jokes!

I wasn't expecting that ending photo but that story is spot on. Cats rule the world!

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