Prompt of the day “Nunchunks” - Ensure Others Be Well [ #FreeWritePoetry ]
Around we go,
On life’s carousel.
Never to know,
If our landing will be well.
We carry on,
Knowing only time will tell.
After much time has gone,
Look and we shall see.
The anchoring point,
Is where our focus should be!
Like nunchucks we swing,
Individually we be.
Bumping and jostling,
The ride ain’t pain free!
When our grip is done,
We let go, hard land.
Dust our selves off,
Reach out grab hands.
For the more of us holding,
Onto life’s carousel.
The more of us helping,
Ensure others be well!
Well this one came right off the top of my head, not the smoothest poem but I do like where it went. Thinking of the idea of people being the nunchucks bumping into each other while having so many swinging around holding onto the outside of life’s carousel and how the anchoring point, where we are holding on, is the focus point of the entire ride while also reinforcing the idea we may bump each other off but we can also help each other back on!
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Cam, i didnt know what nunchuckies were
😬 We carry on,
Knowing only time will tell.
After much time has gone,
Look and we shall see.
The anchoring point,
Is where our focus should be!
Thats my steemit life
Thanks for the Poetic start of my friYAY
Your quite welcome thanks for stopping in ❤️
Hope your day goes well, beautiful weather for me starting my first day of the weekend looks to be a good day off chillin 😎
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Chilldrillsaturday
Precisely 😎
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Nice work with the poem and with nunchucks as a symbol for people.
Thanks my dear, I am pretty happy with this one also ❤️
It was a fuzzy idea as I started but really filled out by the end, people may get beaten up like nunchucks but they can also keep swinging the choice is theirs!
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Thank you for this.
You’re quite welcome my dear glad you enjoyed it ❤️
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Write on, we could put that to music.
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