Day 127: 5 Minute Freewrite: Friday - Prompt: sunburn

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The life and death of Jimbo

The life of bread is a simple life but they all fall to the same brutal and timely death. This particular piece of bread was named Jimbo. He lived packaged up with his family in what the humans called the supermarket (they called it bread paradise). It was their safe place - for now. One day out of the blue one of the human grabbed Jimbo and his family and tossed them into their trolley and took them home. This time was coming and death was approaching - and what could they do? They were just pieces of bread.. just food to these crazy humans. The lucky bread died a simple life - made into sandwiches and eaten up. However when Jimbo heard the word toast he freaked out. These humans had a thing called a ‘toaster’ but to him it was just a giant sun bed. Sometimes it wasnt so bad but sometime they would get sunburnt. Sometimes they would be left in there and forgotten about until there was smoke and fire, the bread no longer able to be recognised. Jimbo was placed in the toaster and cooked well beyond his liking. The humans then smothered butter all over him (this did help his sunburn!) and then peanut butter. This was it his time was up. The human ate him up. This is the sad life of a piece of bread

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Ahahah this was so creative! I do hope that bread don't get to sit in the supermarket for too long (fresh is better!). The toasting part was genius! I'm a bit worried that people would use both butter and peanut butter on a piece of bread. That sounds wrong. Please, tell me it's not real!

It is real @poetrybyjeremy. We all put on butter and peanut butter and jam or some syrup!

cries. Why. Just peanut butter is enough :P

buter peanut butter and jam!

Thanks! yeah the first thing that comes to mind is sitting on the beach etc but wanted to go as far away from that as possible....Fresh is best for sure! hahahaha thats what I do!!!!!

Oh my god! Why would you do that?!? Yeah, the beach is pretty 'typical', but I love on an island... I had to!

cos then its extra buttery mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Was this inspired by "Sausage party"?
It's a silly movie, but I kind of enjoied it =)

I like your 5-minute-freewrite format, it must require a huuuge fantasy

hahaha naha just wantted to get away from the beach sunburn thing and thats the first thing that came to mind

Ouch! Sorry for you :D

I love your story something out of the ordinary! Well done!

Great imagination. Well done. I hope I won't have trouble getting my toast down tomorrow morning.

Haha thanks - I think im going to feel like a murderer

Clever use of the prompt! Now I'm in the mood for toast!

Not me il feel like a murderer

A tragic tale! Alas, poor Jimbo...

What a creative take on this prompt! Awesome :D

Thanks. I wont look at toast the same way!

I think that his life was more meaningful than many others, he was nutrient and needed for giving life to someone else plus he will be digested and go back to the earth in another form..
Very interesting and alternative freewrite! Keep up the good work!

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