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RE: Day 71: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: toothache

in #freewrite7 years ago

I wrote a story for both this and #story-300words: https://steemit.com/fiction/@ahmadmanga/freewrit-the-rabbit-who-loved-candy-short-story

For those who only here for the story, here is it:

The Rabbit Who Loved Candy

In bunny village, lived a small group of rabbits.
They have a farm with a lot of greens, and they worked together so they can eat hay each day to live healthy.

But one of the rabbits didn't work with the rest.
He didn't like the hay very much and so he didn't want to work on it.
The small bunny loved candy.
They other rabbit told him it's bad for him.
He should work together with them and eat healthy food with them.
But the small bunny wasn't listening.

One day the small bunny tooth hurt and so his stomach.
The dentist bunny told him he ate too much candy and he has to remove his tooth.
The small bunny lost one of his teeth.
And he learned from his mistake and started working with other rabbits.

[The End]

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