#Freewrite: On A Rainy Day

in #freewrite7 years ago

A story about a shopkeeper waiting for costumers in a rainy day.

This is my entry for #freewrite day 54 Prmopt: Rain... It took 5 minutes but I edited the result so it can be read more easily.

On A Rainy Day

A rainy day is a slow day...

I lost myself reading a book... No one comes to this the quiet store on rainy days like these.

I heard a sound and looked to the glass door of the store.

I found a girl in front of the store, but she wasn't a costumer... Most likely, she was here for shelter, waiting for the rain to stop.

I thought of letting her in. It must be cold out there and her clothes must be wet from the rain.

But then I saw her talking on her mobile phone, so I decided to wait until she finishes.

A young man came by. She greeted him and joined him under his umbrella.

Glad to see this scene, I returned to my book. You can only witness things like these on the rainy slow days.

[The End]

What do you think?

If you want more of my stories you can read the fantasy story "A Fascinating Legacy" or the sci-fi "Your Heart Would Remember" and "A Murky Liquid". Click here for a list of my previous freewrites.

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picture is from Pixabay.
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Nice freewrite! I love to witness happy young couples or to be a bystander to a chance meeting where there was obviously a point of attraction between strangers.

I love these stories too, I think that's why I didn't need to think much to come up with this~

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