THROUGH THE DOOR (5-minute Freewrite)

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THROUGH THE DOOR (5-minute Freewrite)

a 5-minute Freewrite by A.E. Jackson

THROUGH THE DOOR - a 5-minute Freewrite by A.E. Jackson
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The white door before him opened to a bright and sunny day.

He stepped through and shook his wet head of hair. The new environment had immediate effect as it had done before.

The blazer now starch crisp and dry as the first day it was sown together. His tussled brown locks tumbling over ears and eyes.

He strode forward and to the task at hand.

It was soon complete. He knew it was done because dark clouds had formed overhead.

Thunder rolled in the distance. A streaking bolt of lightening cut across the horizon near the door.

He walked on as rain began to fall. First in a mist, but soon in a torrential downpour.

The cold water drenched his blazer, through to the clean white dress shirt below.

His slacks whispered as they slid together. Mud pooling on his shiny dress show soles gathered, and fell away in large clumps.

As he opened the door, the hinge creaked.

He walked a few paces, and reached for the door knob on the white door.


© 2018, A.E. Jackson. All rights reserved


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I love it!!!

Very nice. I need to try this style of writing. 👍

Nice one. I really appreciate the specific details in your writing. I could see perfectly his wet hair.

Fun. I had to "get" it, first.