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RE: FOXTALES CONTEST #24 - Wild West Fireworks
Continue this story right fucking now!! Make a nother post about it - at least 500 words - I'll send you .250 SBD and send a bot to upvote it. Tag me in the post so I get a notification. Do it now - I'm tagging you in an older Post - I'd love to get your thoughts as to whether or not I should continue the story.
Hey, dude apologies for the late response...
I'm hustling in the garden, getting it all freshened up the autumn / winter vibes has got me chasing leaves!
So about your comment! Does this sound like my first official writing commission? Does it sound like WTF - kinda pressure? YES!! on both freaking counts!!!
What if this story doesn't have an ending? It was born to be a damn cliff hanger! What if the ending kills the damn story?
What if? What if? What if? - We'll never know, if I don't do it. So I'm not going to pussyfoot. I'll do it!!! Screw it if it turns out shit... You'll have it first thing in the morning (my morning). I need to whip out a quick haiku to keep the continuity on my blog; then I can only to write this evening; and don't blame me if 500 words only gets you a bigger mother of a cliff hanger...
Right, having ranted about the challenge. Can you copy me the link to the post you want me to look at? I'm not sure how and where you've tagged me?
Awesome !!! Let's goooooo!!! Cliff hangers are good that means I can pay you for another down the line. I'm trying something new here. Youre the pilot project 😂😂
Just to be clear you saw the decimal infront of the 250 right? Lol 🤣🤣
Here's the link - read the original post and then look at the comments - mines the big one🤪🤪 and I forgot to add the link
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@emwalker/3-33-am-the-biters-are-coming-fiftywords
Yip, I got that guinea pig feeling! More like white mouse matrix sensation, all hooked up and plugged in...
Yip, I'm a bread line writer - it's worth a slice to two ;)
Still no link - send me the raw link
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@emwalker/3-33-am-the-biters-are-coming-fiftywords
Great! I found it...
Go for it! Story line is fine and it has a nice flow. The genre appeals to a large enough audience.
I will have to read it a bit later if you need me to be really critical.
But off the bat, the pop, pop, pop thing doesn't do it for me as a gun shot... I had a similar dilemma in "Wild West Fireworks" that is why the story ended before the explosion actually happened! (you are sworn to silence on that trick), and hence the rant. I am now forced to confront my demons...
It's done bro!
Oops, I missed a comment - Thanks a stack bro! Much appreciated :)