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RE: Finish The Story Contest - WEEK #30! - The source
Can I hire you as my critique-giver?
Ma sister in spirit: I thank you deeply.
Is there anything which I could have done better, though? I know, I will be hurt if yes, but I will take it nevertheless. :) BIG SMILE from me to you
I will read again later and apply a critical lens, as only a friend and admirer can do :)
:) meanwhile I got hungry. Will have some food. The beast is on vacation with its father so I am having the fridge all under my possession.
I love it...Mom has time to herself, time to indulge in appetites, no matter how intemperate :)
damn right! LOL
You two are incredible.
:)