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RE: #FiftyWords: Patched Smaller (Micro-fiction)
Beautiful. In time, maybe, the heart will recover and reclaim those lost bits of love. Or another will find those lost bits -- maybe sweep them up in their arms, and carry them back to the dispossessed.
I hope so.
I hope so too...
I haven't thought of the possibility that his missing parts of heart can be found by another person, great insight in your comment.
By the way, I just posted an eBook containing this story and my other fiftyword entries if you'd like to read that.