The Chase - Fifty-Word short story challenge

in #fiftywords6 years ago

The Chase

Frightened, she hurried her steps. Looking out of the corner of her eye, the mysterious silhouette was still behind her. She turned the corner and hit an officer. "Someone is chasing me." The agent took the suspect by surprise, immobilizing him instantly. His words were: "She left her phone forgotten"

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Oh my gosh, what a misunderstanding. But it is much better that she trusted her intuition and was wrong than not getting help and realizing too late that she should have. Nice work @jadams2k18!

Thank you!

Better be safe than sorry...

Nice built up of suspense in this one @jadams2k18. Well done.

Thank Mr. @cizzo

It's hard to write with 50 words only

Nice twist in the ending!

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