An illusion - FiftyWord short story challenge

in #fiftywords6 years ago

The night was young and alcohol invited me to enjoy the music. My gaze attracted his attention. A few drinks later, our bodies struggled to get rid of our clothes. The bed was still hot, some bills left on the table and a goodbye broke the illusion of the encounter.

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This is terrific, @jadams2k18. What a wake-up call! Things were not as they seemed at all. You managed to write something just a bit racey, but remain in the safe zone. Nice work!

Thanks, my dear @jayna. I tried to describe an experience of an escort lady; they have others synonyms but I think this is subtler

Ah, I see! I thought she was an unintended escort lady. In other words, it seemed she thought they had feelings for one another until he paid and left, unceremoniously.

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