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RE: An illusion - FiftyWord short story challenge
This is terrific, @jadams2k18. What a wake-up call! Things were not as they seemed at all. You managed to write something just a bit racey, but remain in the safe zone. Nice work!
Thanks, my dear @jayna. I tried to describe an experience of an escort lady; they have others synonyms but I think this is subtler
Ah, I see! I thought she was an unintended escort lady. In other words, it seemed she thought they had feelings for one another until he paid and left, unceremoniously.