The Desire - Flash Fiction - Entry For @miniature-tiger's Fiftywords Stories - Wave

in #fiftywords • 7 years ago (edited)

As he motioned to me my heart began to race and a layer of sweat covered my trembling body. I forgot all about Sarah as my hand fell away from hers.

As he came near I knew that this was it, so I left Sarah and followed him into the underworld.


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     7 years ago 

    Cool... another great transition!

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     7 years ago 

    Thanks man :)

    It feels good to be writing again, even if it is matchbook size.

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       7 years ago 

      It takes real skill to make interesting!

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         7 years ago 

        Okay, this is great. A wonder how so few words can convey so much emotion! Nice one :D

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         7 years ago 

        Thank you!

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