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RE: Ghost At The Feast (Fifty Word Short Story)
ohhh no, this has totally failed :( no one is speaking, there are no actors. i will have a think and try to fix it. i'm sorry! Ohhh
ohhh no, this has totally failed :( no one is speaking, there are no actors. i will have a think and try to fix it. i'm sorry! Ohhh
No it didn't i totally got that it was him talking to himself <3
<3 thank you love, swapping speech marks for italics made a big difference, but I was so worried it still didn't make sense. Thank you <3