Nayade

in #fiftywords6 years ago


Nayade




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Nayade would never be the same. His life was free as the wind would be and those who dared to close his way or divert him were bowed down by his fury. No, never the same. The scholar already said it: nobody bathes twice with the same water.

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Good work, @aresbon. I would love a little "backstory" with this one to know what inspired it.

Hello, the micro story could be interpreted as a woman who after a stumbling block made her mature, that's why it would not be the same or maybe it's about how the human being has tried to manipulate the force of nature, but that on awakening unleashes all his fury. Maybe it is not a mistake in the writing and it is not the best image to express. Thanks for making me notice.

Thank you! That helps me understand it better.

That is truly inspiring! There lays great wisdom in this short narration. Thanks a lot!

Good story. Bad experiences tend to do that. Like water that makes rivers overflow, they can turn people into furies.

Nicely penned my friend. Strong little nugget of micro fiction here. Good job 👍

It makes me think of a river god, the personification of the force.

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