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RE: #FiftyWords: Patched Smaller (Micro-fiction)

in #fiftywords • 6 years ago

Thanks for reading and for writing that story...

My end result was a very different feel, but I wanted a strong last line because I read from yours: "she put down the onion." I figured out, if I could make the last line strong all the story will be better.

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks very much... Very good point about the last line, with only 50 words, you want to leave the reader with something unexpected or profound at the end I feel.. You certainly accomplished that here.. Well done

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