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RE: THE OTHERS 2 - The villagers
This is so vivid, deep and beautiful, @erh.germany :) You see the connection in all things from the heart and draw upon it in your writing.
I look forward to reading the next chapter in your story - it has an aire of Celestine Prophecy to it ;) The undercurrent of 'life' that feeds us all but few are aware.
It is we humans who think about such things longer. Animals forget." "No," she had contradicted him. "You're wrong, Remo. They don't forget. They just don't hold on like we do."
So true.
Your translation is impeccable - I know that must be difficult. I didn't even realize this until you mentioned it - I am very impressed :)
Wishing you a beautiful weekend.
Much love to you
Thank you for your compliments :)
I am happy that you are curious for the next chapter. As writing causes the most terrible critic in me I always look from above at my story and think that it's not good enough... That changes from time to time and than I think that it's not so bad at all. ... Sigh...For sure you know the feeling when something expressed does not cause any doubt whatsoever. Than it's excellent. Those diamonds are hard to find (or created, I should say):
That's why I am delighted that you recognize my attempt to see the connection of all things.
<3
Yes, @erh.germany I very much understand. You are putting a piece of yourself out there, after all ;) You are a lovely, deep writer though.
I cannot tell you if that feeling ever goes away. I wonder. Maybe every writer has these feelings.