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RE: Borderline Madness - Finish the Story Contest, WEEK 21
An awesome story, my friend. You capure my attention and the ominous danger licks the mind as I root for the soldier faced with the insidious power of the Those. Well written.
Thank you Janelle. I'm glad it had that sense of immediacy and the alien powers of the 'Those' came across in the narrative. I wasn't sure if it had danced the line between trying to be inventive and just ending up confusing. Anyway, the main thing is that it creep-ed people out and had that fiery violence as well ;-)
Oh yes, you nailed it!