RE: The Allies of Old, Book Two Renewal: Chapter Eleven "The Hunt"
First Austin, then Jack, then Jared, and now Demon kissing, fondling and manipulative luring. Anna sure is testing many many dangerous waters. Just wow lol
Now Austin is obliviously jumping into this black pitfall called Anna and throwing himself deep into her entrapments of turmoil. I bid Austin farewell, there is no turning back now from his blindness in love.
Another fantastic chapter, expect these compliments to keep coming, I just love your writing style, I really feel like I am there in the situation.
Also, all that work to hunt down one demon??? They have their work cut out for them, especially since he wasn't a necessary a strong demon, albeit he was a well known defense attorney but still! What an elaborate execution just to avoid human interference to rid the world of one demon. Lol they did it though!
Lol, I've just read your other comments, it's great to have you back with us :) I'm still snickering after re-reading some of @jedau's comments too, hee, I love how passionately involved he gets, and generally pissed at Anna hahaha! This experience would not be nearly as rich without the two of you, I promise you that :)
You make a good point, it does seem like a lot of work, though to be fair three of the five people involved are completely new to this (and I should have, in fact will insert a brief conversation between the brothers about how much easier it would have been for them to take care of it on their own--except they're going to need more able bodied demon hunters so it's worth it)
I love the questions like that, there are definitely some changes I will be making based on you and Jed's observations. One of my biggest challenges have been trying to make the chapters end properly, and even the books in fact, It's possible that I will end up splitting these two books into three based on some of Jed's thoughts.