RE: Reborn: Chapter Thirty Three "One Down"
The majority of this read like a supernatural newspaper and it worked really well giving flash scenes of the action of them catching, subduing and destroying the various types of demons that have broke surface in to this dimension from their own dark dwellings. I just have Sam and Dean in my head the whole time, using Castiel's dagger destroying each entity as they vaporize into nothing. Even how you describe the black liquid spilling scene is very Supernatural-esque and it's so great to see the parallels in this novel of yours. It's like reading an extension of the the last season or the beginning of a new one.
I see Anna and Josh possibly becoming closer to one another at the rate in which they comfort and aid each other with their companionship. The back and forth banter amongst the brothers is always well done, but it's high time we see what their father is all about. I hope Anna makes it smoothly beneath his harsh, no nonsense having radar. Great chapter my friend...now I have binge read to the point where I have to wait like everyone else. How truly saddening. I knew I was moving too fast, this need for the virtue of patience was indeed inevitable.
Wow, you really caught up fast! I know, it's so hard to do the chapter by chapter thing! I wish I could sneak you some sections, LOL. The next chapter is a good intro to the father and some info on what's doing in the world of demonic activity...the chapter following it is one of my favorites, then a couple chapters after that, another of my favorites as that is the action you are really hoping to see, lol.
Yeah once I'm into a book, I breeze right through it, you know how it is I'm sure. Thank you for the extra details, I'm anticipating all your creativity and great twists and turns, No disappointments at all and I'm open for anything you've written. I can't wait, but I must! :)
And I should add, things soon after start speeding up and taking more twists and turns...and bringing in some more kickass characters of the non-human variety ;) Don't want to give away too much, but want to give you something to look forward to!
Oh I know you have some big things in store my friend! Non-Human variety is what I'm expecting indeed, and I'm so excited, thank you for the heads up.
Great summary, brother!
Thank you so much bro, I'll be aiming to give you the same kind of feedback for your novel. :)