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RE: Dirty Old Town (Short Fiction) - Part 1
Nicely done! In such a short piece, you managed to convey so much detail - I felt like I was there, watching this scene take place in front of me. Excellent work!
Thank you @traciyork. I appreciate the feedback and am glad you enjoyed the opening to this trip to the not so glamorous side of London. It is really gradifying to hear that you felt like you were watching the scene as I was trying to achieve that immediacy of feeling through the style of writing and the point of view I chose. I shall be publishing part 2 tonight or tomorrow. Many thanks for your comment and visit to my blog :-)
You're very welcome - I'll keep my eyes open for part 2! 😊