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RE: Writing workshop volume 4: Serial fiction projects on Steemit
I absolutely love @johngeddes Private lies series. I also follow @Michelle.gent and @pPapa-pepper and enjoy their their writing too. I am going to check out @Bigpanda .I would love some feedback on a series I started doing here. I am enclosing link and would love your opinion on it. thanks
https://steemit.com/fiction/@timmo3663/outlaw-nation-a-prequel-to-emp-series-grid-down
Thank you so much for sharing your link. I will check it out! Write on!
I just read your whole prequel and will look for your additional pieces, @timmo3663. (I need to do so when I am at a computer vs. my mobile phone.) You have a very compelling writing style and I was captivated immediately.
Also, I absolutely love historic fiction that tells a story based in a specific era. I have an upcoming workshop post on this topic.
I look forward to reading more installments in this work. My one piece of advice is to break up your passages with more paragraph breaks. I didn’t particularly mind the longer passages, but they can be daunting to the reader’s eye.
Thank you again for sharing your work!
Thanks for reading it and for your input. I see what you mean about breaking it up into more paragraphs. I look forward to your upcoming workshop posts.
Thank you, @timmo3663. I have many more planned. 😊