I just read your whole prequel and will look for your additional pieces, @timmo3663. (I need to do so when I am at a computer vs. my mobile phone.) You have a very compelling writing style and I was captivated immediately.

Also, I absolutely love historic fiction that tells a story based in a specific era. I have an upcoming workshop post on this topic.

I look forward to reading more installments in this work. My one piece of advice is to break up your passages with more paragraph breaks. I didn’t particularly mind the longer passages, but they can be daunting to the reader’s eye.

Thank you again for sharing your work!