Jazz Firebrand's Last Dance (Removed)thinknzombie (59)in #fiction • 7 years ago (edited)This story has been removed by the author. If you are a writer, come and join us at @ink-ubator #fictionworkshop #story #writing #teamaustralia
Wow this story has that quality where you can't put it down. The flow, the suspense, the characters. Very exciting read.
Thanks @deltatrek. I'm really enjoying your editing comments too. Finding myself agreeing to all of them.
Perfection. Just perfection. Someday we'll be bragging "We knew him when..."
This was a cool story zombie. I enjoyed both parts!
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STOPStunning. Absolutely brilliant. Major talent, Mr. Zombie.
Thanks John. I just found a tense issue in the last paragraph (sigh...). At least it's not enshrined in the blockchain for all time. What? Wait...
These are admirable and neat.