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RE: Alternate Part 3: Clarabelle's Miracle

in #fiction7 years ago

Oh. My. God!

This was an amazing read!

First of all, awesome opening picture. Gave me a good laugh ^.^

And boy oh boy, what a story! :D
I like it very much that you changed the scenery from the slaughterhouse, and also love the idea of Bob, the old, lonely man.

Very beautiful ending to an otherwise brutal and twisted story!

Thank you for taking your time and writing your own ending. It means a lot to me and it was indeed a terrific read!

I hope you will like mine as well, it does indeed have a positive ending after all. ^^
(Sorry for linking my post here in your comments. My part 3 can be found by clicking here.

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