Wow, intense stuff. I can't help but enjoy anything with a Gerald in it, the name just sounds nice to me, but furthermore this piece was as deceptive as it was... insightful as to the nature of the protagonist.
Who reads their own handwriting and thinks it's "superb"? The same person who would be the dominant one in... this kind of relationship. That is, assuming he's not really insane. The part about making the kitchen pure... Well, one has to wonder!
Quite enjoyable reading, @cizzo. Makes me regret not having more time or a longer attention span to stay on top of your posts.
I wanted to play with expectations in this short piece, and I'm glad that came across as being a bit deceptive.
Really like your thoughts on it and glad you enjoyed it @steemedchitty
Sometimes it's just luck of the draw when things are posted and when we have time for a gander.